IELTS skills : essay “Urban pollution”

IELTS skills : essay “Urban pollution”

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Urban pollution and use of personal cars.

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The rising level of congestion and pollution found in the most of the world cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in the cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more. Discuss posible ways to encourage the use of public transport.

It is well known that population has been growing fast in many countries. This definitely, has significant influence on number of private cars which has been constantly increasing. Consequently, if the humanity do not take preventive measures it will result in inevitable problems. Many citizens believe that switching from private cars to public transportation is one of the solutions and offer some different ways to attract more users.


Firstly, public transportation system must be developed in terms of area coverage and voyages frequency. In case when some areas are uncovered by the public lines, as a general rule, our preference of transport certainly will be obvious. For example, a friend of mine who works with me seldom uses a bus to arrive to the office. The reason for this is public transport timetable – bus comes only twice a day.


Secondly, from economical point of view, the prices of the tickets have to be decreased and subsidized by the government. This will prevent inhabitants from unnecessary waste of money on expensive gasoline fuel. They would rather save this amount of money for other things that can improve their lifes.


Thirdly, we must raise people awareness about the environmental damage resulted by CO2 emissions. Generally speaking, emissions cause global temperature increase and deteriorating effect on climate conditions on our planet. Advertising this issue on big signboards with pictures of ozone holes will transmit the idea to the crowd.


The conclusion to be drawn is that if we want to encourage people to use more public transportation we must make them understand that society can benefit not only from cleaner air to breathe but also saveing money. In addition, authority must provide the all public transport conveniences to enable feasibility for everyone who chooses it.

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