IELTS Problem and Solution essay: Violence on TV

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IELTS Problem and Solution essay: Violence shown on TV (Band 7.0)

A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

Modern mass media is full of violent programmes and movies that is often believed to be one of the evident reasons of the juvenile crimes increase these days. This essay agrees that an uncontrollable accessto films and video games that contain violent elements influences young people negatively by providing a wrong example of problems and conflicts solving.  First, this position will be proven by an analysis of tendency of an immature child’s brainto simulate aggressive behavoioural patterns. The necessity of control measures as limited internet access and reduction of time spent in front of the screen will be also discussed as the most effective ways to improve the situation.

The main reason why children should be limited from violent media is a tendency to copy the behaviour of offenders and criminals in the real life. In other words,rarelydo teenagers realise that on no accountshould their actions in the reality be identified with the violent character. By imitationof the cruel hero, young people lose control of themselves, becoming more aggressive and less responsible for their lives in the long run. For example, according to statistics, horror movies lovers choose aggressive methods as fight or force to resolve conflicts.

The best solution to this worrying problem is parents’ control and correct attitude to children’s activities. To put it differently, not onlyis it crucial to block the free access to violent programs, but it is also necessary to fulfil children’s spare time by involvingthem to sports and arts. Moreover, it is extremely important to spend more time with children by gathering for family occasions and conversations, reducing in this way time spent at the TV and computer. For instance, havingconducted a research among school children, scientists have revealed that young people who are less addicted to mass media have grater stress resistance and less aggressive behaviour.

In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that a negative example is provided for children by violent media watching and this can be solved through TV time reducing and internet access limitation.

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