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Nowadays some people think it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Шаг 1: после перефразированная формулируем наше мнение + 2 аргумента почему:

While writing by hand is sometimes believed to be no required for children, in my opinion, this is still an essential skill inasmuch as it develops fine motor skills which boost the cognitive development of learners in the long run.



Шаг 2: поясняем первый аргумент + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции

The development of cognitive abilities is the foundation to boost academic performance through learning to write by hand.  Handwriting involves requires fine motor skills which in turn enables the development of neural connections.  A student is, therefore, more likely to thrive academically as they will have a well-developed ability to memorise, and hand-eye coordination amongst other essential skills which boost an individual’s confidence. Moving a mouse, or hammering a keyboard although essential does not have the same potential.


Шаг 3: поясняем второй аргумент +пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

To write by hand is still often required as a result of the inaccessibility and, at times, the inconvenience of digital gadgets. Moving to a fully digitised environment requires tremendous resources and as such many organisations are still paper-based.   For example, often when visiting a doctor, for example, forms need to be completed with one’s personal information. Thus, today’s context demands flexibility and therefore the ability to be able to operate in all circumstances.


Шаг 4: дублируем мнение в заключении + суммируем оба аргумента:

In conclusion, I believe that handwriting skills are essential to be taught at the beginning of a child’s academic career at school to boost cognitive development and to ensure that no matter what situation is encountered a person can function is important.


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