IELTS essay samples: Agriculture and Farming Industry

IELTS essay samples: Agriculture and Farming Industry

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samples: Agriculture and Farming Industry

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(4 шага = Band Score 8.5)

Some support development in agriculture, such as farming industry, creation of new types of fruit and vegetables. Others disprove. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Шаг первый: перефразируем задание + формулируем 1 аргумент за и 1 аргумент против во вступлении + выдвигаем наше мнение (какую сторону поддерживаем):

Advancement in agricultural sphere are both supported and refuted by many. In my opinion, I believe that scientific progress is an inevitable development that aims to cover modern needs of our society.

Шаг 2: поясняем почему необходимо выводить новые сорта растений:

On the one hand, proponents of progressing agronomy appeal to rapidly increasing demands for food supply in overpopulated regions and I agree with them. At present, the ratio of urban dwellers to rural inhabitants highlights the need for reliable and highly effective crops. Not only do innovative crop species provide sufficient harvest to feed the growing  population, but they are also efficient in conditions of land deficit caused by drammatic urbanization pace. For instance, a glaring descrepancy between the proportion of land taken for public facilities and farming zones makes it virtually impossible to cultivate naturally selected crops.

Шаг 3: поясняем преимущество естественных видов + пример для подкрепления моей позиции

On the other hand, opponents of cutting-edge technologies base their views on the assumption that these artificially selected species might have unpredictable health consequences in the long run. On no account should the possibility of various genetic disorders development as a side effect of consuming genetically modified produscts be ignored. A prime example is a soybeans that are often believed to be a prime cause of malformations among newborns. Though there is not enough solid scientific evidence, this food must be undoubtedly treated with a certain degree of caution.

Шаг 4: делаем вывод + дублируем нашу позицию в заключении:
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I am firmly convinced that the battle against famine in densely populated regions will be lost without progressive farming technologies. It is time governments took the first steps in promoting these technologies.

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