IELTS essay: Charity

IELTS essay: Charity

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IELTS essay writing: Charity

Сегодня расскажу вам как написать IELTS essay “Charity” в четыре простых шага.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Шаг первый: после перефразированная формулируем наше мнение + 2 аргумента почему:

There is a point of view that students of senior classes have to work as volunteers. I agree with the indicated position. Firstly, this essay will discuss expanding sympathy towards others as a result of these lessons, and secondly, it will analyze benefits of needy persons.

Шаг 2: поясняем первый аргумент + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции

The main reason why volunteer services should be included in seniors’ school scheduleis that suchpractices are enlarging kids’ humanity, kindness and sympathy towards others. In other words, youngsters who are working as a teacher, cleaner or helping impoverishedand unhealthy people are more likely to mature into socially responsible adult. For example, an opinion poll conducted by “Levada Center” showed that 85% of adults who give money and goods for charity used to work as volunteers in schools.

Шаг 3: поясняем второй аргумент +пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

Another reason why educational institutions have to obligate students to work for community is that charity work is literallyendless and volunteersare required constantly. In other words, even though teenagers seem to be less efficient than adults they are still able to bring significant help. According to Russian Fire Services’ report for 2018, one of four volunteers helping people who have lost all in the fire was under 18 years old.

Шаг 4: дублируем мнение в заключении + суммируем оба аргумента:

In conclusion, taking into account all written above, I am firmly convinced that schools have to require that pupils work as volunteers. This is due to the fact that suchexperiences expand teenagers’ kindness and, moreover, support impoverished and needy people.

240 words

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