IELTS Essay Discuss Both Views: Money is the best gift to teenagers

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Some people think that money is the best gift to teenagers, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

Шаг первый: перефразируем задание + формулируем 1 аргумент за и 1 аргумент против во вступлении + выдвигаем наше мнение (какую сторону поддерживаем):

While giving cash to young people is sometimes believed to be the most appropriate, there are those who are strongly opposed to this. In my opinion, I believe this gift should be preferred by parents since, being presented with money, youngsters gain a golden opportunity to learn how to manage this resource, while the risks of money misuse are negligible.

 

Шаг 2: поясняем преимущество  + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

Although monetary gifts are sometimes believed to be misappropriated by their recipients, it is financial literacy that is gained while managing these presents. This is because, at some point in their life, teenagers have to learn how to deal with their personal finances, be it some pocket money or a gift to spend. If not being provided with this opportunity at this tender age, they are likely to get burdened with debts in their adult life. To illustrate, The Junior Olympic Committee rewards young winners with a small sum given over a span of 5 years to spend for this very reason.

 

Шаг 3: поясняем другую сторону + ослабляем этот аргумент предложением “However, it is clear that…”:

Admittedly, there is some likelihood that this monetary present will be poorly managed, more often than not, since never before has the young generation been bombarded with such a variety of temptations to waste money on. For instance, every second top-selling computer game tends to literally rob young gamers of their pocket money for updating their profiles. However, these mistakes are not only virtually inevitable but also, to some extent, educative in terms of financial management.

 

Шаг 4: делаем вывод о преимуществе (дублируем нашу позицию в заключении)

In conclusion, though people may vary in their opinions, I am convinced that money is an advantageous gift since, being presented with a monetary gift, children are nurtured to be financially literate in the long run.



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