IELTS Essay Discuss Both Views: Teenagers to follow the advice of older people

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Some people think that it’s good for teenagers to follow the example and advice of older people, while others believe youngsters should challenge it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.


Шаг первый: перефразируем задание + формулируем 1 аргумент за и 1 аргумент против во вступлении + выдвигаем наше мнение (какую сторону поддерживаем):

Recommendations of older people are often believed to be useful and precious for the young generation. However, there are those who are reluctant to accept this point of view and assume that youngsters must live their own lives and do not follow the instruction blindly. I entirely support the former view because aged people are more experienced and wiser. Firstly, this essay will discuss the historical aspect when generations used the experience of their ancestors in order to survive, followed by the analysis of assumed maturity that accompanied teenagers when they make decisions based solely on their expectations and ambitions.


Шаг 2: поясняем преимущество  + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции

On the one hand, youngsters should take into consideration the fact that our historical development is the result of accumulated experience. If humanity had not taken into account the experience of older people, they would not have survived. Consequently, even nowadays, young people have to accept and use the knowledge of those who live longer. When I was a child, for instance, I used to listen to the advice of my grandparents concerning edible mushrooms because they were more experienced in this question.


Шаг 3: поясняем другую сторону + ослабляем этот аргумент предложением “However, it is clear that…”:

On the other hand, teenagers who always challenge the recommendations of older people tend to prove that they are mature and independent. Not only do they ignore this advice, but they also often try to prove otherwise considering this a way to become adult. However, this could be ineffective to act contrary to those who experienced the same mistakes in the past. To illustrate, having carried out an experiment among young students, scientists have revealed that the most successful teenagers tend to follow the recommendations of their teachers.


Шаг 4: делаем вывод о преимуществе (дублируем нашу позицию в заключении)

In conclusion, in my view, although people may vary in their opinions, I believe that youngsters should follow the advice of older people because it can provide them an opportunity to thrive in the long run.

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