IELTS advantages and disadvantages Essay: Self-employed or to work for a company

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Today, many people choose to be self-employed rather that to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?


Шаг 1: формулируем 1 преимущество и 1 недостаток во вступлении + пишем какую сторону поддерживаем:

At present, an increasing number of people are leaving their stable jobs, opting for freelance. One possible reason for this is rapidly evolving technologies that enable remote working, while restricted opportunities for collaboration are a major drawback closely associated with this type of employment.


Шаг 2: поясняем преимущество+ пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

Firstly, the root cause of this trend is cutting edge communication technological breakthroughs that ensure a reliable connection regardless of location and time zone. Not only are freelancers able to maintain contact, be they, residents of megapolises or inhabitants of a tiny village lost in dense jungles, but they can also perform a wide range of assignments without contacting with colleagues. If it were not for this state-of-the-art innovation, employees would be still chained to their office desk, not being able to manage their career and balance their lives. To illustrate this, the highest rate of freelance workers has been recorded in countries with the largest Wi-Fi coverage, such as the US and England.


Шаг 3: поясняем недостаток + подкрепляем примером:

The downside of being self-employed is known to be possible professional isolation, dimming peoples’ prospects for sustainable career growth in the long run. A prime example is the IT industry, where, were it not for updating their expertise on a daily basis, programmers would not be able to meet current coding requirements. Thus, on no account should the pivotal role of the working environment and face-to-face communication, as the key to successful, continuous, development be ignored.


Шаг 4: в заключении дублируем наше мнение:

In conclusion, an observed dramatic increase in the number of freelancers, being caused by the digital revolution in the communication industry, is irrevocably tied to vocational isolation.  263

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