IELTS Agree-Disagree Essay

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IELTS Agree-Disagree Essay: CELEBRITIES

Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

OPINION Эссе в 4 шага

Сегодня разберем тип “opinion” на примере эссе моей студентки

 

Шаг первый: после перефразированная формулируем наше мнение + 2 аргумента почему:

The Yellow press industry has become a multi-billion sector of the world’s economy which is fueled by the attention of the public to gossips around movie, music and media starts. I strongly support the opinion that this bombardment by low-quality information has no avail for the young generation. Firstly, this essay will cover the ethical side of this phenomenon, and secondly, it will show the harmful consequences this vast media coverage has.

 

Шаг 2: поясняем первый аргумент + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции

The primary reason why media content based on rumors around celebrities is deleterious is its adversarial effect on children’s and teenagers’ moral qualities. Not only is it immoral, but it also makes children mean towards others, which can be observed at schools, where, for instance, bullying has become a widespread disaster. As a result, the yellow press nurtures the least decent qualities in youngsters on a wholesale scale.

 

Шаг 3: поясняем второй аргумент +пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

Another point to consider is a plague of depression among children and on no account should its danger be underestimated. Youth follow stars and celebrities in social networks, observe their posh fake lives and suffer from an inability to live like their idols. Happy as their careless lives are, children still suffer from foul mood caused by mass media. For instance, several students have even committed suicide recently in the USA after continuous depression.

 

Шаг 4: дублируем мнение в заключении + суммируем оба аргумента:

In conclusion, summarizing the stated above, I am firmly convinced that media coverage of the lives of celebrities is both unethical and dangerous for children. By catering adults’nasty demands, they spoil children’s delicate minds thus enriching soil for bullying and depression.

 



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