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Some people think that schools should switch from print textbooks to digital textbooks on tablets, while others disagree. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

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Шаг 1: после перефразированная формулируем наше мнение + 2 аргумента почему:

Ii is often argued that educational institutions should implement digital textbooks on tablets instead of print textbooks, whilst opponents disagree. I completely support the latter view because print workbooks has proven its considerable influence educational process. Firstly, this essay will elucidate the assumed opportunities of digital textbooks, and secondly, will analyze the proven benevolent impact on student’s comprehension of knowledge.

Шаг 2: поясняем первый аргумент + пример для подкрепления вашей позиции

On the one hand, the opponents of usage digital textbooks claim that implementation of these devices might add the newest cutting-edge technologies into educational process. Not only will schoolers receive opportunities to searching information in the Internet, but they will also complete their tasks at home and send it for checking in advance.  However, it is clear that this digital equipment requires adding support, such as free internet for updating; furthermore, it aggravates children’s eyesight. For example, in 2014 having carried out research among British students, scientists revealed the deterioration of children’s eyesight by more than 50%.


Шаг 3: поясняем второй аргумент +пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:

On the other hand, on no account should the proven long-lasting favorable impact on children’s educational process be ignored. In other words, large quantities of students were taught by using of textbooks, and this approach has proven its advantage. If it were not textbooks, global society would be deprived the indescribable feeling of touching the paper. For instance, in 2017 survey in London’s schools showed that the overwhelming majority of adolescents prefer textbooks than digital textbooks on tablets.


Шаг 4: дублируем мнение в заключении + суммируем оба аргумента:

In conclusion, taking into account all that is written above, I am firmly convinced that print textbooks ought to remain in education. This is due to the fact that paper workbooks have proved its efficiency and it will remain timeless classic in the long run.





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