IELTS essay Advantages & Disadvantages: Globalization
Сегодня разберем тип “Advantages and Disadvantages” на примере эссе моей студентки (Band Score 7.0 approximately).
Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?
Напомню, что этот тип эссе имеет два варианта – с запросом на ваше мнение и без:
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. (no opinion asked)
- What are the advantages and disadvantages? (no opinion asked)
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion. (your opinion asked)
- Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? (your opinion asked)
- Does this tendency have more advantages or more disadvantages? (your opinion asked)
Пишем эссе с мнением в четыре шага
Шаг первый: формулируем 1 преимущество и 1 недостаток во вступлении + пишем какую сторону поддерживаем:
Nowadays it is acknowledged that distinction among regions is getting less obvious annually. It is known that throughout the world citizens of each country exchange equal vogue trends, firms, nutritional tendencies, commercial aspects and television stations. I believe that the benefits of integration far overweigh its drawbacks because by joint efforts world development is achieved more speedily. This essay will first discuss co-operation with countries for solving common issues as the main benefit of globalization, followed by an analysis of the major drawback which is assumed negative outcomes of standardization.
Шаг 2: поясняем преимущество культурной глобализации+ пример для подкрепления вашей позиции:
One of the principal advantages of erasure of borders association for addressing the challenges. Rarely do people understand that the battle against global issues will be lost without national cooperation in the long run. This is because global problems that concern numerous countries and regions should be solved through integrated efforts. Thus, on no account should the globalization positive impact be ignored. For example, having carried out recent research among problems of illegal logging and illegal trading in timber over the past 30 years, the union of European countries has saved about 3,000 hectares of forests.
Шаг 3: поясняем недостаток культурной глобализации+ подкрепляем примером:
The main disadvantage associated with globalization is standardizing. This is because people tend to use common trends all over the world. Since time immemorial, equal tendencies suppress forming new, unique for each country trends. As a result, all spheres have become one-sided and cultural patterns are not able to survive among other strong vogue propagandized icons. However, it is clear that a highly original trend will appear, even under such pressure. For example, in 2014 a new fashionable trend for teenagers was established, this attempt was supported by more valuable fashion brands, thus they made collaboration and nowadays this brand exists and sells clothes for youngsters.
Шаг 4: в заключении дублируем наше мнение о культурной глобализации:
In conclusion, the benefits of globalization, such as unification outweigh the disadvantages because collective problem-solving helps our world and economic develop rapidly.
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